I felt you could have gone other places with the story. It wasn't thorough enough to be worthy of having it's own article. Anything said about Wie is irrelevant, anyways. You have to get information from her point of view before you can really say she's a quitter. If she just simply won't say anything, then you're forced to guess, but I still didn't like this article. It felt more like you were preaching to kids than writing an article.