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Blacktop Culture | 3 comments (3 topical, 0 editorial, 0 hidden)
meh... (#1)
by IUfan62 on Sun Jun 10 2007 at 11:14 PM EST
While I was reading this I felt like i was reading an essay for school. Wasn't nearly as interesting as your last article. I also think you stereotyped a bit when you were talking about kids and how they like streetball better. I know plenty of kids that laugh at how ridiculous the "mixtape tour" is and are actually turned off by it. There was a spelling mistake or two also.

Thanks (#2)
by kirbygarlitos on Mon Jun 11 2007 at 1:39 AM EST
Thank you for the comment IUfan62. I appreciate your honest opinion and will look forward to improving on my future works.

Cheers!


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