"It is no doubt that you are a talented writer who possesses a lot of guts and raw energy.  You have a unique skill for creating characters that instantly feel like real people and sound like real people.  The issue here is that you have not taken these characters and built a story around them that has the strength to be considered in the feature marketplace."

IDK, it's about three friends hanging out in the neighborhood. There's really nothing more I can do with it. Was this not the storyline of Menace 2 Society? What was the plot of Goodfellas? Not that I'm comparing my crap to those movies, but I'm just wondering, can't you write a script anymore that simply follows people at a particular time of their lives? Does everything have to have a formula?  

Anyway Vin, I wouldn't worry about your script being laughed at. You have to figure some psycho from Montana sent one in written on 35 neatly folded pieces of green construction paper. We'll always have something over that guy.