it needs some work.  Seems scatter-brained as ideas seem to run together, such as the depth of the bullpen immediately followed by the divisional race with no transition.  Also, try supporting your claims with evidence.  Instead of saying "Oliver Perez can't keep that up this year" and moving on, tell me why you think that.  Is he too old?  Too mediocre? Explain your thoughts and your articles will be much better.  Other than that, it's a good preview on the Mets.