I like it. Not front page material, but very good stuff. There's a typo with the paragraph that starts "Things look pretty good.."... You have "First year quarterback, junior Anothny Morelli..." Unless he spells his name that way haha. But yeah good stuff!

For the record, I predicted Penn State's season on pure intuition. I said two weeks before the season started, to my friends, "Penn State is gonna be a top 10 team this season!" They laughed but I laughed last.

I could have used a little more insight to make me really believe that Penn State could kick butt this year. Exaggerate, don't even mention a weak player, just ramble about how great your great players are.